hey this is really good. My favorite verse is Here we all make mistakes and then regret, we wish to have the love we never felt. And want to get lost in a deep pool of peace, To break free and finally find our release. Alot of great feeling in this part i think. Keep it up 5/5

Very well done, rhyme, content, style....superb.

hey--
thas awesome! i gave you a 5. Thanks for your comments i really appercaite it!
--alexandra

This poem was really gooooooooooooooooood keep it up *hugs*

beautiful work

For the ones that hurt… and are torn apart,
The rose turns black like their broken heart…

I love that. Well written poem, keep it up
~*Freak*~

Hope someday I'll write as good as u...though i don't think so:))

Awesome poem!!! great job!