u know chris...the lines that u used is the exactly i want to tell to my mom.great job.i love it.:)

hey i thought that poem was really good, and i read it to my mom and she really liked it as well. If its ok may i put it on my webpage and have ur name written on it underneath. plz get bak to me. my email adress is jodiecd2003@yahoo.com Thank u

Really good for a first poem being posted.

WOW, this poem is really great!
Good work
Love Julie
XOXOX
Take care

great poem..u should write more...5/5...

To me this was more like a letter of remembrance then a poem, however you do express how thank full you are towards your mother and how much you love her

aww..thats rilly sweet..u rilly love ur mom dont u?