Well I suppose it wouldn't be a dark poem if it had a happy ending now would it? Still, I thought it was quite good. I like when they are short and sweet. Unless they are epic, then long is ok. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Yeah, i liked this.
I prefer dark poems, so i found this was one of your best pieces, well done.

xxx cici xxx

Very nice poem..i like it so much..keep up the good work :)

Nice poem
very well written
very picturesque... expressesses the scene so well
love
amy

Nice! liked it.
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