Very nice....I requairs some deep reding into.

This was a good poem. I liked it! I really liked the part about tears not existing and being all used...for some reason I just thought that part was good. thanx for your comment on my poem. I really tried hard on that one :) i will be reading more of yours :) great poem!

I reli can relate to this it got me all choked up (basically in tears) It's amazing well done I'm onli 13 u shud read a couple of mine - mine arent as in depth as yours so if u can criticise please do thx. Great job!