up in my room, my blood my own
were I slice until I carve the bone....??? don't you mean 'where'?

very dark.. and touching.. i lykd reading it.. i like the line before the last : "and in my hand, what u forbade" the word "forbade" give a deeper meaning to wat the piece has to say..
keep it up
nouna

whoah... that was really deep. your a great writer. *adds to favorite authors* great job 5/5

that was great, 5/5