nice

omg, that's freakin awesome, haven't read a lot by you lately..... wicked come back though, that's really great.
Definitely a five

emma x

Beautiful. Wonderful description of an incredibly painful goodbye and the desires that come with it.
I love how you expressed the want of your pained memory in the leaver, and the guilt and pain to tie with it. I also love how you showed this to be "the last embrace" with no future of comming to the way things once were.
I especially admired these lines,
"I hope that when you close your eyes
My image embodies your face
Holding a significant keeper
That no other memory could replace"
I admired how you portrayed the unique image and events that had taken place that could never again be acheieved.
Excellent