Thats a really great poem, makes me sad :(
Ele xxx

5/5 elissa, loved it. it was sad
love always
your friend
harley

It has alot of emotion.. I loved it.. Keep your head up and take care.. Nd keep writing (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

That waz really good..5/5!

Thanx for commentin on my poem!

Lotz of Love,
Katie

WOW. I really really really liked this poem you wrote right here. all this stuff that you just explained in here is EXACTLY how I feel about someone. anyways 5/5

Wow, this is an amazing poem. my favourite stanza:

"My hate for you
Burns inside my heart
But still I miss you
And I hate that we're apart"

i love the skillful contradiction. congrats, keep writing, u have such potential.
xxx