OMG! You deffinately have a way with words girl! Loved it and ur going on my favourites list so when you get any new poems - i'm reading them! Lovez it! :)

I agree with the comment above me. You're very talented!

This is great.. I can hear the pain and want... keep up the great work...
Xox Sherrie

I can very well-y- relate to this poem.... it sounds great. Kepp up the good work ^^

very interesting! i like it-like it! 25/5

An inteestimg concept, that got me thinking. A well written piece.

Keep Writing
Nici

Really heart aching,and sad,but you expressed all so perfectly
Well done

Wow! The depth of emotion expressed in this poem is amazing... The tragedy and sweet sorrow potrayed so beautifully... Great poem! :)