This is a very nice poem and it sounds pretty neat, and i usually don't like reading poetry that doesn't rhyme, but you caught my interest :) great job! and thanx for that comment on my angel inside poem. i try, even though i don't always think the quality of the poems of mine are good. but thanx for saying i do good. u do to. keep up the good work :) im gonna be coming out with a new poem called anxiety. pleaz read it

this was very well written i like the last line about the love. thanx for ur comment on my anxiety poem. people know now and i am healing.