Comments : Lethal Deception

  • wow, I like thiss, but I'm a little confused, is it about a human or a robot? or a human that has been so much hurt by life that they are practically robot? great job anyway. x

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    Honestly I'm not sure what it means either...I guess it's just open to interpretation.

  • 14 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Interesting write, deliberately obscure? Doesn't have to always make sense for it to be good and in this case I think that the slight confusion that this illicits from the reader; making it open to interpretation, makes it even more powerful. I'm definately adding you to myu favourites and I look forward to reading more. Keep writing! 5/5 x