wow, I like thiss, but I'm a little confused, is it about a human or a robot? or a human that has been so much hurt by life that they are practically robot? great job anyway. x

Honestly I'm not sure what it means either...I guess it's just open to interpretation.

Interesting write, deliberately obscure? Doesn't have to always make sense for it to be good and in this case I think that the slight confusion that this illicits from the reader; making it open to interpretation, makes it even more powerful. I'm definately adding you to myu favourites and I look forward to reading more. Keep writing! 5/5 x