Comments : A Juxtaposition

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very interesting poem and enjoyable to read!

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I really admire this. Wonderful use of vocabulary and elaborated text. I especially love your symbols and how you tied in an imagery to pertain to the actual subject itself. I escpecially admired these lines,
    "A polarity of perversity
    An innocence, it’s pure.
    Picturesque malice-"
    I love the contrasting thoughts and beauty which is tied into them. Excellent work