That was a really good poem.... I loved it

hey....that was a really good poem.....read "Rumors" and you will find out what i have to say....
//.:amanda:.\\

really good!

A long read, but an interesting one!
Some of your lines seemed a bit wordy, but the poem as a whole worked well.

Keep Writing,
Nici

wow, that was a really good poem really deep. and the best part was every word was true. i hope ya'll work it out.

Wow, I love it if that counts for anything.

this was a good letter into a poem but it just seemed way too long oh well nice try.

*tear* I know how you feel. I really really messed up my friend when I made a move on a girl he liked. omg. Thank you for letting me read this. 5/5. Good job. kilman = David B.

Awwww...that's soooo good.... and also, if you eva need anyone to listen, i'm here for you too.... that's a poem, i feel too often. i feel like everything i've said and done is horrible, but yet, everything the other person did is excellent. but, sometimes, we make mistakes. it shouldn't make a friendship end. true friends, understand, that sometimes, people need to vent and get their feelings out, whether its an argument or what not... know what i mean? anyway, im here for you... ok? don't forget.

lots of love and hugs, always,

michelle

Great poem...wow