Comments : The Earth shattered

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    beautifully written straight from the heart. I hope everything turns out OK. I read your profile first, and then this poem, and you are so right, it is really weird how life turns out sometimes, but just remember God is in control, and if you ask, you sall recieve, if only you believe....always in my prayers, you are truly a talented writter....Love ya Becky

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    I like the last lines

    'It all melted away...
    Like an ice cube in the sun.'

    thought it was very good and true