hey
great poem
its so deep...*tear*
but dont try to kill yourself, just remeber of the good things in life like your family, friends and your hobbies! keep your head up and fight this like a soldier!

The subject is abit off but the execution of the poem was right on it was both stong and held to your message. I really like d that great job Keep it up...

Perfect detail you have an amazing way with your words! Another well written poem! I look forward to reading more of your work! Take Care~