i lyk this one too.. a sincere call to ppl u love who r hurting.. i also lyk ur rhyme, even tho i dun notice it that much at times..
hope evrythin is alrite
take care. hun

i agree with Katy. The emotion in this poem makes it powerful. really well written poem. you have talent :)
im adding u 2 my favourites because i wanna see where your poetry goes :D
5/5

<3 Darien