wow, this seems real. Hope its just the product of your vivid imagination Kayla, good write.

Aww Kayla...it will be soon!! i cant wait until you two get together that will be the best day ever! Great poem, take care, and talk to you later!

You are really good. There's not a lot of good freeverse writers. But you have a lot of talent keep it up. and thanks for commenting on mine. I added you to my favorites. Do you have msn messenger. If you do you can add me riataleigh@msn.com

wow that was a really good poem! im impressed! thanks for commenting on mine!

Very good. Love..keep writing! I just fell in love with you.. LOL!

great poem. i love the imagery u give!
keep writing...see you
meg