Well, to start with..you're not a looser. It's not the end of the world when you loose an election. You were made beautifully and obviously it wasnt mean to happen. You were made ofr bigger and better things. The sooner you realise that, the better life will become. I loved this poem, it shows your pain and anger. Keep it up!
Love Sarah
Xoxo

ok on the 2nd paragraph
Firth-should be fourth
on the 12th paragraph
gild-should be guide
you say your a loser because of an election first of all I doubt the content. any man in politics I doubt would be in such a self pity mood as to kick himself so bad in anyones eyes even Gods. All and all I find it very unbeleiveable. But thats just my opinion oh well. If you get time please any of my featured work and comment and vote it would mean a great deal to me. Take care...

thankz sarah. robert that really didnt make since and if you didnt notic i was runing for my School and i wasnt kicking my self it was just a poem on the top of my head becase i was so mad at God for not helping me and all. well thanks for your comments guys
love yea
robyn