i thought that it was good...i gave you a 5/5

wow.this is a really good poem.definetly 5/5.thanx for rating my poem.
~good luck~
jasmin

Wow...YOU CAN WRITE!!

this was a VERY good poem...keep writing...it seems to be a very natural talent for you...keep smiling...and...

"I will see you over the rainbow"
Chelle XOX
thanks for reading my poem

Good poem, keep it up, ur a good writer

Wow .. that was good .. thank you for the comment on my poem i appreaciate it! Luvs