Hey yay! I loved it, just loved it! Great poem written with careful thought! :)

Great idea! Very well done! Exellent work! Keep it up! ~Brooke~

What I got from this great poem was that a human keeps in him the power and pride of nature, and in general is everything, drawing his power from emotions.I don't know but this is what I understood:)

I like it... I think it would suit better in the section poems about nature, though, because it does have metaphors revolving around good ol' mother nature.
The flow was perfect; for a poem with a rhyme scheme, I think you should congradulate yourself on it.
However, I do think that the only thing this poem is lacking is proper spelling and grammar. For one:
"As soon as there told."
"there" should be "they're". There are some others, but I'm sure if you read through it again you could correct it.
nice work!

great poem! 25/5

This is an amazing peice of writing. The images of each season, of each time of day, is very clear through your words. Creative! The rhymes were amazing, and although the flow was broken, it made the poem even better. I'm going to add you to my favourites. This is one of the best I've read. 5/5 :)

Darien

This pieces upbeat rhythm seems to set it off nicely. Again good description and imagery.

Keep Writing
Nici