omigoodness. that was really sad, but i really liked it, good job.
Always,
-Kit

Nice one, although u had a "double rhyme", I mean u used the word "heart" twice to make a rhyme, but besides that I was good.
Plz, check out some of mine when you get the chance, thx.
Keep it up *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Awesome poem, very deep. I loved it keep up the good work. 5/5
~ApRiL

very kool thx 4 the comment 2^^ ttyl

Like this 1 muchly <3

I've always said to the ones around me "we are born so that one day we may die, whether that be by fate, by self hate, by old age, or just unknow or natural causes, but everyday we live, we are closer to dying" GREAT poem. loved it:) please comment on mine or vote or somethin. it would mean alot:)
~chloe<3

We simply MUST believe there is something more to our existence than...this.
Life can be so unbearably cruel, cold, and callous at times.
A wonderfully rhymed verse which is as direct and on point as it is moribund.
Well done, XxCrimsonxSinxX...
~Dean Kuch