good thing it aint true :)

ok maybe work on the rhyming a little..
its a good start..i gave it a 4...revise it and make it flow better :)

I'm in the situation you are, need a little advice on writing and what not, well to note your line "I did not think it would be so hard to leave this horrid place" was longer, probably double, then the rest of your poem, try shortining it down. newayz it was good and i give ya a 5/5!

excellent poem. :kudos:

AWSOME poem, i really liked it, keep it up!

Another great poem, it stired up a lot of hidden emotions for me. Still, it was very well written. You did an amazing job.

Kalika

Another great poem, it stired up a lot of hidden emotions for me. Still, it was very well written. You did an amazing job.

Kalika