Beautiful! I loved this. It was a great poem. Keep it up:)

Beautiful a brilliant write! I love your work! You should write some more I'm adding u to my favs to see if u take my advice in using ur talent to write some more :P Laters plz comment and vote on some of mine

Thanks Clare for the comment!
If you will write me back and tell me the name of one of your poems then I will comment on onr of your poems! If you do decide to right me back then remember that my poem is called Never and it is by me, Elliemay!

Thanks,
Elliemay

Very good poem.