That was GREAT, you are a true poet indeed. Nice written and expressing your words so well. You should visit this siter and try to get your work submitted www.teenink.com

You must be 13-19 years of age though. Again nice job and keep it up.

Jennifer aka CRAZE

i like the rhymes. if i wasnt atheist, i'd probably like it better. :) n e wayz!! yeah. i like it though.
-nancy. COME AND CHECKOUT MY NEW QUOTE!! i like it!! im confused by it though. lol. and thats sad. :( lol.