Very well done! I like the feeling in this poem! It's sad but true. I love the ending. Take Care! Brooke~

wow that was fan-reakin-tastic keep up the good work and if you dont mind please comment on mine thanks and much love Rylee

i like this poem because it as alot of imagery and i can imagine everything you are talking about

I love this one! It's got a great deal of emotions put into it, And it Gets straight to the point! =]

luv natz x0x