hey! this is a really great poem... and it makes sence! i totally understand what your talking about and where your comming from... keep writing & the best of luck to ya!!

great message although i am still afraid of death lol.
~Freak~

I was never afraid of death. And your poems give me a ton of reasons not to fear it. Awesome!.. :)

good job. I really liek your poems and this one has a lot put into it. great job and keep writing.

may it all be true - good write bud, keep it up