i liked this poem a lot!!! and you should do a 2nd one but its up to you
keep up the good work!!!

cnt tel u i love u but i love ur poem! 1 in a million! keep it up!

i think you should do a second one because i really liked the first one and the second one would probably be better good luck keep writing.. check out some of my stuff....

ya go for it do a 2nd one thta one brill
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