First I will say welcome to the club.

I've read a couple of your poems and so far I've seen the same kind of style. Maybe it's time to switch it up and write in a different format. I wrote the same types of poems when I started writing and now I'm starting to learn new styles and trying to work on a few. I think the aa-bb thing can get a bit boring after a while. We'll get better with time....

Also if you really love poetry and it is something you take seriously you should write out words such as "you" and "to" It's not really cool to replace them with "u" and "2" People who take poetry seriously won't bother to read your writing.

Nice write though... :) Hope you like the club!

Nice poem. You expressed yourself nicely here. Good job:) And thanks for the comments on my poem. It really meant alot:)

I know what you mean with the 'love songs on the radio' when things break down. Nice poem.