this wasnt bad at all i liked the beginning a lot
~Freak~

Another good poem :)
your your rhymes are really good..
maybe you should check out some of my poems?.. i have a totally different style..

wow this was real good, emotional....
i enjoyed it great job x)

That was good! keep it up!! 5/5!

i used to feel like this to. we have so much in common and i think other people on here do to but at least we can count on each other for help.
Good job on your poems. I really like them.
~blackroseblood~

Wow. That hit me really hard. It was really good. The
" Now i slowly slip from life
With the help of this knife"
I liked the whole thing and keep writing. Check out "Her Last Kiss" I think you'll like it. It is sort of on the same wave link as your poem here. Thanks for the read. Rbmo401.

oh my i really liked this poem...and it rhymed to (lol) sorry i just really prefer reading rhyming poems but your free verse poems are great too but i really did like this one. Keep writing

Ttyl
Maddy

wow nice powerful poem feel free to rate and comment on some of my poems

o wow...your poems are so sad lol! but i like the emotion in them