Full of emotion! This poem brings the reader inside the story.

Keep Writing
Nici

I can relate, very much. You've painted it very well indeed.

she did read it and she liked it! but she didnt have to go! thanks god!

hey, this one's really a great poem.
You express your feelings soo well.
and thanks for commenting on my
poems. take care, Marjan

I felt the emotion, for sure. The rhyming and flow could have been better, but the words and emotions made up for it. Nice job.

nice work man !! keep it up !!

This is so sad, and full of emotion. At some parts the flow becomes a little awkward like here:
"To Know you might go
But a better life
No more feeling low"
but overall very good.