good, it is great, that worked in so well together, and it is really true, if you ever need to talk just pm me ok

much love
Lucy

The poem is just fine, so don't worry about if you did a good or bad job on it.
Tim

yes it's good..And life sux but you'll always make it through the rain..Always member after every tear comes a rainbow..i've been there i'm still goin through rough times but i'm never gonna give up i'm gonna hold on and u should 2..And by the way terrific poem..Great job..<3 lindsey

not good or not, lol it had damn be good if its from you!! i loved it 5/5, yay* instuments play and loud applauses* lol we're such doofs, *the room fills with laughter* see what i mean?! lol. i wrote a poem about life and shitoofy lol, and suicide called, life and the world and what it does to me. its good in my opinion, which isnt professional either lol, no surprise.
love always
your friend
harley/your double doof friend lol

Loved your poem, i can relate, i'm here if you need me! babyflirt2315@yahoo.com.

Loved your poem, i can relate, i'm here if you need me! babyflirt2315@yahoo.com.

I felt the deep, depression, but the end stanza didn't really complete it.