Incredible

Simply amazing. Perfectly wrote and brought tears to my eyes. Well done!

Oh my good what an emotional poem......
This poem is so sad..... Sadness flows throughout the poem.....
Ohhh what a lovely poem.... I'm in love with it...

I want to comment on this piece but all i can think is wow. This is a wonderful heartbreaking tale.

Adam it was beautiful
So well presented is the 3 perspectives of lives so interconnected and the frailness of love and the shallowness of trust so well emoted...
heart touching ......

Such emotion in this write

No words, lovely! all i can say