Awesome job.. its really describtive and helps the readers feel how you feel.. 5/5!! keep it up

GR8 POEM HUN REALLY LIKED IT XXXX

This poem.....speaks for itself...

I have a poem kinda like this its called Come Get Me,,,well again excellent jobbb. XXLISSA

OMG THE ENDING WAS REALLY GOOD

WOW!!that is very deep!!i love it.