Very good poem.

5/5
haha i didnt notice the "My First Love, I Love You Baby!" gosh im slow..haha.. i like it ay.. beautiful poem! stay happy =]]
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I really enjoyed the way you wrote this poem, I thought it was clever and unique. In relationships we'll always have hard times, but they'll always open our eyes to the good stuff we weren't paying attention to. Excellent job 5/5 GG23