Wow... really really really good poem. I loved it... it's incredibly powerful and had an impact on me.. you put a lot of things into perspective.

xxx cici xxx

You have no idea how much that helped me thankyou i hope you don't mind if i tell other people about this poem and have them check it out b/c it is so true and im glade you will live your life to the end

Thank GOD i read this poem before it was too late.. :o)

hey, amazing poem..great work indeed

all the best forever

Hey sammi..........lovely poem hun.........im so sorry 4 ur uncle.............but hun..........i knw u well........u'll b ok...........just hang in there and stay strong........u r my angel......who never gives up. :)
and remba im always goin to b here for u no matter wat. ur poem is so deep huni.........so powerful its jus so amazing i cry. thanku for this poem too....it made me relise few things too....im glad i read this. love u nami
xoxoxoox

I loved that poem sammi
your such an amazing writer.. there is so much meaning in your poems which i think is great..
keep up the great work
maree xoxo

Wow Wow Wow. Absolutley fantastic! I am sorry for your loss and i understand how you feel to an extent, my uncle also commit suicide, just this summer. He jumped off a cliff near where we live, leaving behind 3 children.
" Suicide is a permanent solution, to a temporary problem"

Its so touching for people like me who has had family or friends commit suicide...or even tried it themself. its a great message to send out there!
xxxx
abby

Wow, this is an amazing poem, the next time I feel suicidal {again} I will read this poem. Thank you for writing this, it may just save my life. Keep up the good work.

Wow...this bought tears to my eyes, well done Sammi!

Nice poem I like it.. pretty sad though. :)

5/5. I wasnt considering suicide. I've tried and I failed. This poem made me cry. I'm so sorry for your Uncle. But you made me realize if I ever do that I should pass it on because I know who really cares. I've tried it before and I really found who cared. My aunt Tina and Paula n Paula's kids, and my mom and her bf and my brothers and my dad really cared. And I knew in teh end Ryan did care for me, even tho he wasnt there at that moment. I'll have to remember this poem in case I ever feel suicidal!

Thank you!

I can really relate to this poem a lot.
It made me tear up just reading it. The fact that you put so much emotion into it made it that much better. It has an amazing message in it, you're a great writer. 5/5.

In suicide you just pass it on,
To the people who actually care,
Because with yourself you take their hope

That a true and deep thing there, I'm sure that if I ever think of ending it again, I'll rethink about your words. Your poem meant a lot to me really