Not confusing at all. very very cool poem. Different from what you normally write, and it is really wellwritten at that. Thank you for all your comments, Heather, they mean a lot to me:)

Eden

I really enjoyed this one (as per). Thank you for your last comment (as I'm sure you're aware) it's always nice to get feedback from poets you admire. I hope you are alsoe fine.

(If I'm honest I escaped depression about a month ago. I still find writing about it a major release though.)

All the best.

i think it's a very well writen poem, i wish i could say more but if i want to get some more read i can't

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Speechless Heather my dear friend thats how this poem has left me. Brilliantly metaphorically put, I'm awe this piece was immaculate I have missed your poetry so much darling :o)

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