I really like this one great job. god bless

This poem is great I like the words you chose to rhyme. I'm sorry that is the scenerio thogh... hopefully things will get better

U write so well neha. good job!
try some of mine like- AM I HURT?
it was written wid the same feelings as u hav in this poem.
i hope u will like them.
take care, bharti

Awww, Neha. My delicious, grapey, amazing, beautiful lady friend. It's incredible!!! I love it. Everything fits. It's truly wonderful. =)
Heart, Jessica. (Apple)

I like this poem, good job =)
keep it up! && thank you for your comment.
.xx.