Yay! That's so sad but so awesome, I love your rhyming xD So great, good job xD

wow, let me just say.. that's a very sad poem. I liked the emotion I got from it. It was awesome..

That was a pretty good poem! 5/5!

I didn't really like this one...The rhymes seemed too forced, and there were too many cliches for my liking...

But the message in it is good, and the story too...Many people face such problems everyday...ITs really sad..

keep it up

this poem was sad and well detailed. thanks for commenting on my poem. i appriciate it.
Good luck in everything you do.
~blackroseblood~

Amazing. It doesn't seem like a friendship poem though. It's reallly good. I like the rhymes and the whole flow. I love the story that you portrayed. I myself deal with my parents fighting at least once and day. There have been threats and everything! It's crazy but thank you!!! I hope things get better.

Naima

awww...that poem was really touching.... very well written...

i enjoyed this one but again i think it would benefit from more imagery...i liked the line...I saw my dad cry a bucket of tears....this is the sort of thing im trying to aim at.....also the rhyming seemed a little forced...as in u was tryin to make it rhyme so it didnt flow as well as it perhaps could have. hope u dont mind me being constructive?! take care and please return the favour
xxxLoUxxx