excellent poem. the repetition of "the rose" really does this write well. "the quite moments i spend" quite should be quiet, I'm almost sure (or else this part doesn't make sense).

Lovely job with the metaphoric descriptions....simply ingenious write. Be proud of this piece.

Really nice job, I don't know if the fact that you didn't capitilize "I" was for effect or not, but if it was not, capitillization always makes a poem look more "professional". Anyway, lovely poem! Keep it up!

Thank you both, yes, i messed up on both 'Quite' and the capital I thing :) very useful and thank you for spotting it.

great!! loved it! 5/5, i loved it by far!

Wonderful!!
That was truly a great poem.
Im adding you to my favorites.^.^

</3 Erin

amazing poem..i loved it up until the very end. great job. keep up the good work. =)

*5*

~Christina~

thats really good. but i wonder who the rose really is. =D. keep writing

"and one day, yes...one day I'll offer it a pot, "

Such a good line, metaphoric, visualistic and expressive.

Another good effort mate.

(4am, can't express myself properly!)