perfect poem hun. 5/5. im going through the same thing you are except i cant let go no matter how hard i try. and i wont let go cause i wanna make things work. keep up the good work.

~david~

hey!! great work i really liked this poem! mwAz.. FanX 4DA commEnt... keep on wriTting u aRE so talentEd! StephY :):)

Nice poem. Very strong words. I really liked the ending. Good job:)

Wow amazing poem! this is exactly what my mother went through!

Keep it up!!