hey thankyou for the comment your poems are very good we have similar writing i like
i hope you enjoy my poems i enjoy yours
writing is a gift and you have it
enjoy it
thanks
jess

Hi Beth, thanks for your kind words about my poem.

I'm giving this one a 5, I know there is error in spelling, and it is very short (who says it has to be long anyway?), but the pure naive innocence of youth in this poem really appeals to me, and i have no doubt you mean every word.

Keep it up!