i love it its a great story and so true to reality xox sam

hey i added another stanza tell me if u like! ciao.....

This poem was terrific! I loved the imagery. I could picture the ballerina twirling and dancing her frustrations away. Great job. I think you should leave stanza 5 in. Oh, and thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot:) THANKS!

Heya hun.
i have read this poem so many times, i love it. it makes me wish i was a ballarina, dancing is such a beautiful release.but i just wanted to say i love it, go amz it is an amazing poem, it really hits a spot for me.
mwahh, aylz

Lol um yea sure.. i love it too. we'll all be ballerinas..

I htink this is good like it is. You shouldn't change a thing. I like it.