Comments : Lost smile

  • 14 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Poor little girl =( I wish you could smile happily. Very original poem, very well writen, awesome work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Toni

    A smile without a meaning,
    No matching light within my soul,
    A smile that's lost it meaning,
    From tears flowing out of control,

    That bit in particular was brilliant, absolutely beautiful work. I dont actually think u needed to repeat the first stanza at the end, still brilliant though! *hugs* xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thanku both so much xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    that was such a sad poem i have to apologise i havent read your poems in ages ive been away but im going to now . . . this is really good but so sad i wish you could smile for real . . . it was really well expressed and had a great depth to it . . . 5/5 . . .
    take care,
    x x x jen x x x

  • 14 years ago

    by confusion

    sorry buckets i didnt comment earlier. spliffin poem ell, your life is damn well worth while hun.
    marshmallows and hugs, lu -x-x-x-