Yay! It's so good xD Really sad and depressing though but it's really awesome xD You should write a poetry book or soemthing like that!

Read my new poem - A Lycans Hunger -

-AynJal

I know the ending isn't that good.....i always have trouble with me endings!

*my

It was a great poem. But I didn't think it "flowed", other than that, it was very good. 4/5 Keep writing and stay strong.

-Ice

this was really sad. but i like the emotion behind it its portrayed very well
~Freak~

Very well conveyed and written.

It not suppose to flow.......thats the way i wrote it....meh

Great poem lyla. You sad and emotional. You have alot of talent!
Take care,
Rachelxx

Ohhhh and thanks also for the coment on my newest piece of writing, it means alot :)

Whoops, I menna put *the poem is sad and emotional not you! lol!

thats so sad..but theres alot of emotion there,nice work =).

aw, thats so sad. :( if you even wanna talk, just e-mail me. 5/5

I have made too many scars
And I have cried too many tears
I no longer think it's worth it
To live in a world that knows no happiness
And no joy

I relate a lot to that part of this poem. Excellent job. Keep it up.

Much love,
Tiff

Wow, good job. 5/5
~Emmy

I know its bad but I love it when the haziness kicks in
nice write
x

i really liked this poem also, it seems like you are taking my thoughts and puting them into your words and onto paper...wierd huh? anyways keep up the great job!

ttyl
Maddy

good job. 5/5. a few spelling errors though. keep writing.

hmm good emotion

loved it.
it flowed well.

Jacs
xxx

This is a great poem i gave it a 4/5 its not your best, but it is up there, Kepkeep on writing we need more writers like you.

I like how you wrote it, but no points for originality. You and every other teenage girl write about the same stuff. 4/5 for trying.

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