Great poem hun..but dont give up. life is already short, why kill urself, when god does that when its ur time to leave this world. well i like this poem and ive been reading your other stuff, also very good. keep it up. comment and rate my work too please.

This is like a different ending to the last note...great! it's like making different choices in life, but sumtime sthe lead to the same ending, eg slitting the throat

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xxDeLie