thank you so much!!!!!

Well conveyed, very nice.

Yes, your choice of words were really good. The rhymes just blew me away. So much emotion put into your poetry. It makes it rich, and readers love it.
Well, I love it..

<3 Darien

Thanx Darien!!!!

Yeah it kind is a song...I heard it in my head as I wrote it out!!! This an original piece by me!!!!