This isn't the best but isn't the worst. But i liked it.

It was okay. The flow could use some work, but I enjoyed it.

hmm.. im worried. Is everything alright? Your poems are really good, but the stories are really, sad I guess. Well, keep up the good work. Hopefully something brighter? :)
5/5

A good quick pace set this poem off. Short and to the point, yet still had enough description.

Keep Writing
Nici

that was alot better than your other one, i really liked it!

This is sad, very sad. I like it a lot though. I can definately relate to it. Great job.

Love,
Tiff

Wow, nice job! really keep it up and hold your head up high! good job! 5/5!

great poem! it's well written and i can relate. keep writing
crystal

good poem. although you prolly could have rhymed it more 4/5

awesome poem... i can relate completely! 5/5 take care, xoxoxo

Good poem. Your structure was a bit weird and some things could be worded better but you had some great ideas in that poem! Keep writing and stay strong!

It is always so painful when someone who you think is so close to you turns and stabs you in the back. The wounds always take so long to heal. You captured all the feelings and emotions well in this write, well done.

Best regards,

Steve

Another beautiful write
5/5
pls read
murder or suicide
& another poem of ur wish
rate & comment also
i'll leave more comments on ur poems after that
love
amy