*hugs* brilliant poem hun!!! amazing... even if it was in a bad time *hugs* Love you hun.. we'll get there *hugs* xxxx

xx thanku it means a lot x

againn very powerful, seemed it would work well as song lyrics. the lines

Now there is no mending, I’m breaking
You know I break so well

really stood out. unique and fab piece.
take good care, lu -x-x-x-

oh man I know exactly how you feel...Excellent write. Thanks for the comment. Take care. <3

Hey, this is very good...i can kind of relate...keep it up and take care..i hope ur alrite now..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

wow a very different style which i think if im not mistaken u pulled off very well although the first stanza slightly put me off, possibly because they r very similar lines, anyhoo, v good, v diff poem

luv always,
ellie
x

thanku all