Comments : The Pain Behind These Smiling Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-


    Iv'e felt the same way before
    Great poem ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow...this is amazing!!!! i really enjoyed it. keep it up!!
    Ariane
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    again amazingly written, nice work, ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    wow great personification! i love ur poetic conventions in this one. i loved it it was great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by selina

    good job, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Megin

    thats really good 5/5
    xoxo-megan

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Lol, sorry can I have a diffrent poem please, got nothing to say bout this lol:D

    it was great,the flow was the best ive seen resently, sorry :D

    one line confused me tho "I'm broken without" should it be without something? like without you or whatever?

    Sorry again lol, god I said give me a poem you need help with not a fricken excellent poem :D