firstly, thank you for your comments:

"hey brilliant poem! and i love your gay pride one! your peotry is so honest and comfortable.

i tried to kill myself twice, and one of my close friends did also, but after she did, it struck at me so hard how much it owuld have hurt if it had worked for her.

if it all overcomes you anytime you can write me an email or just call up a friend, jsut keep pushing on through, this world shouldnt lose a brilliant poet/person such as you!

luv nanz xoxox "

this one really made my day!!! :)

I got rejected from safeway too, I think there are better places to work anyway.
i mean if they rejected you they suck!!!!
lovely poem hope you got your feelings out.
love sammi
xxx