This poem had a very good idea, but i think you should go over it and fix some spelling errors and such, try to bring some rhythm into it. Its difficult to keep up with a poem without rhythm. But other then that, terrific job!
*keep smiling*
Katy

your poem is really good I cried when i read it g2g

mucho love
angel

wow this poem told a horrible story but was very well written
it flowed wonderfuly and was interesting
great job 5/5